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Cellphones are good for entertainment because you can have fun with friends, family and others. The most important, people use for chatting. Also you can play on the cellphone for example ''Geometría Lite”, etc. You can also see many videos on YouTube page for example “World's End” films, documentaries, for example, ''The trip to Mars without” and histories for example ''The Egyptian pyramids secret hidden” etc. you can also find information on Google for example duties and tasks. Also, you can find social networks like ''Facebook, messenger and etc. Moreover, you can download games such as “Fifa 2017”, Applications such as general purpose applications ''Google earth, Google translator” And also maps for example “Google maps”. You can also view photos, for example, pictures of your vacation at the beach, visiting their grandparents and family. Entertainment in the cellphone is nice because with it we can do some things in free time.

Finally, cellphones are important for investigation because they can investigate the tasks for example, "the task of English, matte, chemistry," etc. Furthermore, you can look for vocabulary and words that are important for example "English or Spanish vocabulary. You can also research news such as sports such as "Fox sports", among others.

In conclusion, cellphones is getting smarter and autonomous; incorporate a sophisticated technology that can no longer be differentiated from us. Also, it is good to have new technology available to us for the simple fact that it is a way to make life easier, just have to learn to use things, as well as the evolution of cellular will see many more developments, we must control ourselves and know how to use things.